Re-Write of three little pigs

Once upon a time there was 3 khajiits who lived at home with mama khajiit. When she thought they were ready she made them move out.Staying together with their trading vans they came to a split path one went this way, one went that way and one went the other way.

The first khajiit made camp for the night. When he woke up the big bad alduin attacked and he huffed and puffed and burnt his trading van down so the khajiit run all the way to his brother.He went down that way.

The two brothers made camp behind a couple of trees. But in the morning the big bad alduin attacked and he huffed and puffed and burnt down the trading van so the two brothers run all the to find their 3rd brother.Who went down the other way.

The 3 brothers made camp behind some dense bush. The big bad alduin huffed and puffed but could not burn down the trading van. So the three brothers grabbed their weapons they could find and attacked alduin. Alduin flew away to find the legendary dragonborn.

Never mess with brothers

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SIR EDMUND HILLARY

SIR EDMUND HILLARY

Sir Edmund Hillary was knighted

by queen Elizabeth the second!!!!         

News of ed hillary’s ascent of everest broke in new zealand on the same day queen elizabeth the second’s coronation.

He was a beekeepers son

His quote is “It’s not the mountain we conquer but ourselves”

Ed hillary was born on july the

20th 1919

He grew up in auckland

Ed,as he liked to be called, and Tenzing Norgay

had surmounted one of the greatest challenges

remaining to man

When reflecting on his life, he declared his most worthwhile achievements had been the buildings of schools and ect in nepal

Writing 1 Scottish log throwing

Standing,heavy log in hands,people watching like a hawk, hills in the background."Okay,go"say the judge,straining I fling the massive log.It as if the log flying high into the air.As log soars through the air it's gone ten meters no fifteen meters.You might think how do we throw logs so far?Well to be honest I don't know.Any way the log finishes at twenty meters

http://www.dogonews.com/2016/8/29/pizza-hut-unveils-the-worlds-first-playable-dj-pizza-box

Pizza hut Unveils the world’s first playable dj pizza box

Well a playable pizza box would be really good cause i could be in the car being board and then we get pizza hut the playable box will keep me entertained for hours on the road and at my house. It would be like a dream come true for when i want to be a dj. Having this would make any child happy including teens so they could be playing their box instead of annoying you. The only thing that has a downside you need a smartphone and they cost hundreds

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FREE WRITE (NORMAL STORY)

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Purpose:Write a free piece of writing

Once upon a time on a normal day a normal guy was out for a walk but his normal day was about to get weird… So our normal guy is walking down romeo st out of the blue he gets sabotaged by bandits, except his watch was no ordinary watch it could signal his agency and these bandits had no idea what’s going on. And so our spy will get back up, find what the thugs are doing and take them down and after that he can go home and rest before another case comes in.