Re-Write of three little pigs

Once upon a time there was 3 khajiits who lived at home with mama khajiit. When she thought they were ready she made them move out.Staying together with their trading vans they came to a split path one went this way, one went that way and one went the other way.

The first khajiit made camp for the night. When he woke up the big bad alduin attacked and he huffed and puffed and burnt his trading van down so the khajiit run all the way to his brother.He went down that way.

The two brothers made camp behind a couple of trees. But in the morning the big bad alduin attacked and he huffed and puffed and burnt down the trading van so the two brothers run all the to find their 3rd brother.Who went down the other way.

The 3 brothers made camp behind some dense bush. The big bad alduin huffed and puffed but could not burn down the trading van. So the three brothers grabbed their weapons they could find and attacked alduin. Alduin flew away to find the legendary dragonborn.

Never mess with brothers

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SIR EDMUND HILLARY

SIR EDMUND HILLARY

Sir Edmund Hillary was knighted

by queen Elizabeth the second!!!!         

News of ed hillary’s ascent of everest broke in new zealand on the same day queen elizabeth the second’s coronation.

He was a beekeepers son

His quote is “It’s not the mountain we conquer but ourselves”

Ed hillary was born on july the

20th 1919

He grew up in auckland

Ed,as he liked to be called, and Tenzing Norgay

had surmounted one of the greatest challenges

remaining to man

When reflecting on his life, he declared his most worthwhile achievements had been the buildings of schools and ect in nepal

Writing 1 Scottish log throwing

Standing,heavy log in hands,people watching like a hawk, hills in the background."Okay,go"say the judge,straining I fling the massive log.It as if the log flying high into the air.As log soars through the air it's gone ten meters no fifteen meters.You might think how do we throw logs so far?Well to be honest I don't know.Any way the log finishes at twenty meters

http://www.dogonews.com/2016/8/29/pizza-hut-unveils-the-worlds-first-playable-dj-pizza-box

Pizza hut Unveils the world’s first playable dj pizza box

Well a playable pizza box would be really good cause i could be in the car being board and then we get pizza hut the playable box will keep me entertained for hours on the road and at my house. It would be like a dream come true for when i want to be a dj. Having this would make any child happy including teens so they could be playing their box instead of annoying you. The only thing that has a downside you need a smartphone and they cost hundreds

http://www.mathplayground.com/ASB_PenguinJumpMultiplication.html

FREE WRITE (NORMAL STORY)

L.G:Use 5 types of punctuation

Purpose:Write a free piece of writing

Once upon a time on a normal day a normal guy was out for a walk but his normal day was about to get weird… So our normal guy is walking down romeo st out of the blue he gets sabotaged by bandits, except his watch was no ordinary watch it could signal his agency and these bandits had no idea what’s going on. And so our spy will get back up, find what the thugs are doing and take them down and after that he can go home and rest before another case comes in.  

PEG PLANES

L.G:Use structural features that are appropriate to the purpose specially in one area more than others and use languages features that are appropriate to the purpose.

PURPOSE:Create a procedural price for your bab product

S.O.S:-use precise verbs(doing words) e.g. pour,blend.

-use order connectives-Firstly,Next,Finally

Peg planes are an easy to make, fun toy that anybody could create.Here's how to make it…

What you need:

3 popsicle sticks

1 peg

Hot glue gun

Glue stick(for hot glue gun)

1)Firstly,Heat up the glue gun

2)After,If the glue gun is hot enough you will to grab the peg and popsicle sticks

3)Measure out where abouts you want to place the popsicle sticks on the peg.Put front two 1.5 cm from the front and back one 1 cm from the back.

4)Now you need to glue the sticks to the peg.

5)Now leave it overnight for the glue to dry

6)Now you have a peg plane

So now you know peg planes are an easy creation to make so go tell your friends about the peg plane!!!!

Purpose:Inform your audience about an event in nz

Audience:A person from another country

L.G:Use sub titles to label your paragraphs

S.O.S:-Have three clearly label paragraphs -Use rhetorical questions to engage reader x2 -Include examples

NZ FLAG

Has your country had a flag referendum?

Well i’m here to talk about the New Zealand flag referendum.

Cost

From November 2015-March 2016 all this for what eh, well John Key knows or should I say donkey. Oh, I should probably tell you  how much it all cost. All this costed a whooping $26 million.

How many votes

If you’re still here you will want to know how many votes the current flag got and how many the new flag got. The current flag got 56.6 per cent and the new flag got 43.2 and more than 2,124,507 people voted.

How it all happened

First, between 20th november and 11th december 2015, a postal referendum asked the question if New Zealand flag changes, which flag would you prefer? Voters were asked to rank the five alternative flag designs selected through the flag consideration process.

Now you know, don’t you? All about the New Zealand flag referendum.

EXTREME WEATHER

HI,TODAY WE’RE HERE TO EXPLORE WEATHER. IN THESE 3 PARAGRAPHS WE SHALL LEARN ABOUT AIR MASSES,MIST AND FOG AND JET STREAMS.

Firstly, as air circulates and the earth, it passes over warm and cold ocean and continents. These alter the characteristics of the air that moves over them. They can make the air cold,dry and moist . The slower the air mass is moving, the longer it will stay over a particular area, such as a warm ocean, and the bigger the influence of the ocean on the air.

Penultimately, If cloud form at ground level, they fill the air with microscopic water droplets that are hard to see through.We call this effect mist or fog. They are essentially the same,  but fog is thicker than mist.

Thirdly and Lastly, a jet stream is a band of fast-moving air that blows around the globe at high altitude.It forms over a large-scale weather front,such as the polar front. There are four major jet streams.They follow wave like paths around the world.

I hope you have a good time learning about weather and  to re-state my three paragraphs they were air masses, fog and mist and jet streams.

 

L.G:Describe my senses during a specific moment.

s.o.s:Describe each of my senses:see,touch,taste,smell,hear

As my eyes capture rain falling, it splashes off the ground. Just for a second my body reacts to saturated sock weighing down my feet. All is silence apart from the rain continuously hitting the umbrella. The air around here smells like wet tar it’s not great, but it's not bad either. Water leaps up to my dry mouth, luckily it raining, if it wasn't my lips would crack and bleed.

NEW PLYMOUTH WEATHER

NEW PLYMOUTH WEATHER

Black melted tar hot like a blazing fire

Walking around the streets my frozen coke is as liquefied as the water

Cold water now boiling

Jumping into the car we turn from hot to boiling hot,now we need air con

Melted sunscreen sticks to our faces

Our jandals burn our feet,but they're not as hot as the concrete

Blue skies as blue like the shimmering water

Sweat rolls down my head as i lie on the grass,heat waves appear as i look onto the road